Reflection of Essay #2

I felt that I did a decent job on this current essay. I did alot of research on the topic of the "crack babies". Even though I had had a real life experiance with a cousin I still didnt know to much about the drug cocaine itself. It was someone exciting to get the facts and be aware of the real harms and such. I felt that my paper flowed and that the paragraphs were in good order. On the last essay I didnt feel that my introduction essay was as strong as it could be since it was just straight facts starting it out. I chose this time to open it up with a string full of questions as if i were frantic to find these answers and such. This gave my essay a base to kind of flow how I wanted it since all of my thoughts were addressed by the intro questions. I also added a little interest, what I thought to be, with a clever little pun. I am somewhat disapointed i didnt get the essay posted a few more days before I did, but I just ran out of time.